Friday, November 13, 2009

D#12, HW#5 -- develop closure

HW#5



*What issues raised in your argument need to be repeated for you audience? Is there any support offered in your argument that bears repeating?*

-Some of the risks may be repeated as they compare with other things.

*What will happen if the current situation continues as it is? What effects might impact your audience, and what effects might impact others that your audience will be concerned about? How could you demonstrate the importance of these effects?*

-The current situation can stay the way that it is. The purpose of my paper is to inform not to convince my readers to take action.

*How could you demonstrate that the current problem violates the shared values of a community?*

-In a way the dangers posed to babies could violate shared values, but I don't think anyone would ever discourage a woman from starting a family.

*Is this present issue parallel in any way to a previous situation? Are there circumstances or effects from a previous parallel situation that might spur your audience to action (perhaps because they want to avoid those effects or because a previous situation was resolved well and you'd like to see a similar resolution)?*

-I'm not trying to "spur my audience to action" so I can't really answer this one

*To which person, or group of people, should your readers address their concerns? How might you encourage them to share those concerns?*

-I would encourage them to talk to their doctors regarding their own health and family planning.

*Will this situation continue if nothing is done? If so, how will the audience be impacted?*

-Nothing needs to be done people just need to be aware of thier health as their childs and make their decisions

Free Writing

Im not sure how to freewrite for this particular assignment because I don't think it has anything to do with my paper because the purpose of my paper is to inform readers not to cause action.

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