Saturday, October 24, 2009

D#9, HW#7 -- Grammar assignment #4

HW#7

I reviewed annotated bibliographies again from the Purdue Owl website. I figured that I can understand and learn more from reviewing this again after I had actually tried one myself. This topic was also the most pertanent to what we were doing in class. I also sudied Organizing Research Resouces on the Quick and Dirty tips web site. I feel that if my research had been more organized then this paper would have been easier to write and I would have had all the tools to make it better. There were a lot of helpful tips especially regarding organizing online research.

ORIGINAL:
Pregnancy Over Age 30 is an article found online through MUSC children’s hospital. This article is anonymous and gives several facts regarding chromosomal abnormalities, and a few on risks of miscarriage and maternal age. This source focuses on chromosome abnormalities such as down syndrome. There is no date given for publication. This article is still useful for my research because it is the best source found specifically focusing on chromosomal abnormalities, which is a huge concern for mothers and doctors in regards to advanced maternal age.

REVISED:
Pregnancy Over Age 30 is an article found online through MUSC children’s hospital. This article is anonymous and gives several facts regarding chromosomal abnormalities, and a few on risks of miscarriage and maternal age. This source focuses on chromosome abnormalities such as down syndrome. There is no date given for publication. This article is still useful for my research because it is the best source found specifically focusing on chromosomal abnormalities, which is a huge concern for mothers and doctors in regards to advanced maternal age. This article compares to others in that it agrees with most, stating that it is a possibility to conceive after 30, but moms should be aware of the risks. I feel that this source is reliable because it comes from a medically oriented web site. Even though this article focuses on risks I feel that it is still written in a very objective manner.

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