HW#6
*Research Question*
-Should age be the determining factor in terming a pregnancy high risk?
*Precise claim*
-Women over the age of 35 or older should be aware of the high risks of their pregnancy.
*Reasons/blueprint*
- doctors are saying that risk is minimal in until 35
-It doesn't matter how healthy a person is at an older age because chromosomal diseases are still increased.
*Complete thesis statement*
-Women over the age of 35 or older should be aware of the high risks of pregnancy because doctors say that risks increase after the age of 35 and even if you are a healthy woman chromosomal diseases in newborns are increased.
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wow, what a thesis statement. very detailed, i like it.
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