Tuesday, October 27, 2009

D#10, HW#3 -- Discuss essay

HW#3

I like the paper in general and think that it is well written and easy to read. I think that this is a good example of WP#3. It It inroduces the topic, provides evidence to support the claim, and it adresses a specific audience. What I would change though is that I would be more specific about conter arguements and have referrenced them.

1 comment:

  1. i wrote almost the same thing, only i said i wouldn't change anything.

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