HW#3
*What did you like about it?*
I like the author's unbias stand on the issue. It sounds like she will be able to make give a lot of information without swaying the reader in one direction or another.
*How does it fit the wp#1 assignment prompt?*
I think this gives a very good description on "research in progress" because it shows her outline and explains where her original idea came from.
*If you were going to revise this to submit for wp#1, what would you change? Why?*
I would give more details on the specific points of research that I wanted to focus on becuase it would help me to organize my paper better.
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I agree, i like the way she wants to see both sides and will show her readers both sides of the argument. I like what you would do in your research project if you were doing this topic. You seem like you will also have a good paper. Keep up the great work!
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