HW#5
2 classmates' drafts that I reviewed are: http://aprb13.blogspot.com/2009/09/research-proposal-d4-hw9.html#comments and http://klindenberg.blogspot.com/2009/09/d4-hw9-rough-draft-wp1.html#comments. I learned that all of us have things to learn, but more importantly I got to see different writing styles that I can incorporate into my own writing. I need to be more specific in my paper regarding statistics, where they come from, etc. Students that commented on my blog were Andres, somethingorother, Scott Sievers , MRdawn. I was surprised by Marrissa's comments because their were so many grammatical mistakes. I was expecting comments on content or organization because this is the first proposal I have ever written, but the grammar shouldn't have been so bad. My turnitin report shows that there are no matching sources for this report and the similarities are 0%. I feel the area of most concern is my cohesiveness and I need to work on tying my paper together.
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